Paper 2 · shape a description or narrative
Plan a coherent scene or sequence and use precise details, purposeful pacing and suitable language.
Section Paper 2 · Writing · two composition sections
Exam scope and assessment notes
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Before you begin
Work on paper. Try each question before revealing help, and explain why your method works.
Quick readiness check
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What you will learn
- Create a description of a person, place or situation.
- Tell a connected real or imagined story.
- Use vocabulary, tone and paragraphing to hold a reader's attention.
Section 2 gives a clear choice
Candidates choose one of four titles: two descriptive and two narrative. They are advised to write about 400–600 characters; the section is worth 25 marks.
A description paints a picture through selected details. A narrative tells a sequence of connected events. Choose the form that best fits the prompt and the material you can develop.
Plan details and movement
For description, choose a viewpoint and organise details by distance, senses or change. For narrative, plan a starting situation, turning point, response and consequence.
Use precise verbs and details rather than a string of general adjectives. Keep a consistent viewpoint and paragraph flow.
Sources for this lesson
Pause and explain
What does a narrative need besides an interesting event?
Worked example
Prompt: Describe a place just after a rainstorm. Plan three connected details that create one atmosphere.
Show the worked solution
- Set the reader in a specific place.
- Select details that share a moment.
- Use a final detail to reinforce the atmosphere.
Answer Possible plan: water gathers along the steps; a bus moves slowly through a reflected sign; one shopkeeper opens the door to let in the cooler air. The details build a single quiet, post-rain scene.
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Test this topic →From guided practice to a new situation
Write your answer and reasoning first. Use a hint only if you are stuck. The model solution is for self-checking; your written work is not automatically marked.
Outline a narrative about a plan that changes unexpectedly. Include a setup, a change, a response and a consequence.
Give me a hint
Keep each step connected to the next.
Compare my reasoning
- Explain the original plan.
- Introduce a believable change.
- Show a response and its result.
Possible outline: a class plans an outdoor reading event; rain begins; students move the books to a covered hall; families attend there. The response explains how the plan continues.
Look for these in your work
- Includes a clear setup
- Connects the unexpected change
- Shows a consequence
A description uses «beautiful, nice, wonderful» three times. Replace the general praise with one visual detail and one sound detail.
Give me a hint
Choose observations the reader can imagine.
Compare my reasoning
- Choose a specific visual feature.
- Choose a sound linked to the scene.
- Explain how the details shape the mood.
Possible plan: pale lantern light falls across the wet path while bicycle bells sound beyond the gate. These details help the reader picture and hear the setting; a qualified Chinese teacher should review any final Chinese wording.
Look for these in your work
- Uses specific details
- Includes different senses
- Connects details to atmosphere
You have 450 characters for a narrative. Which matters more: adding another unrelated event or developing the turning point already in the story? Explain your choice.
Give me a hint
Use the character range to prioritise development and coherence.
Compare my reasoning
- Identify the current story's turning point.
- Check whether its effect is clear.
- Choose the revision that strengthens the sequence.
Develop the existing turning point if its effect is unclear. A new unrelated event adds length without helping the reader understand the story's change or outcome.
Look for these in your work
- Uses the narrative structure
- Considers limited space
- Prioritises coherence
Common mistakes
- Listing details without an organising view
- Adding an ending that does not follow the story
- Changing register without a reason
What can you explain now?
What does a narrative need besides an interesting event?
Compare with the explanation
A connected sequence that shows how the event develops and resolves
The reader needs to follow cause, response and consequence.
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Make it stick
Explain one decision that helps you create a description of a person, place or situation.
If you needed the solution, close it and solve the problem again from a blank page. A correct answer is stronger when you can explain the reason for each step.