Build an argument from claims, evidence and explanation
Answer the question with a qualified thesis · Give each paragraph a distinct analytical purpose · Connect details to the developing judgement
Section AO2 · Meaning, context and deeper interpretation
Exam scope and assessment notes
0408 preparation for exam year(s) 2025, 2026, 2027, 2028, 2029, 2030. The assessment changes in 2028; follow the component and selected texts for your year. Original StudyForA teaching and practice, with fictional examples labelled. Other well-supported literary readings can be valid. Model answers are for self-checking and do not award Cambridge marks or grades. Full set-text reading and text-specific teaching, complete timed papers and qualified literature-teacher assessment remain unfinished. Coursework must be the candidate’s own work, assessed through the centre and moderated by Cambridge.
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- Confirm your exam year and centre-selected full texts. Coursework and both papers are compulsory; private candidates cannot enter 0408.
Work on paper. Try each question before revealing help, and explain why your method works.
Quick readiness check
What should support a claim about a literary text?
What you will learn
- Answer the question with a qualified thesis
- Give each paragraph a distinct analytical purpose
- Connect details to the developing judgement
A thesis answers the task
For a question about trust, “The text presents trust as possible but fragile” is an arguable position that can be tested across moments. A summary such as “The story is about a journey” does not answer the same question. Use a qualification when it identifies a real tension, not as a way to avoid taking a position.
Paragraphs develop rather than repeat
A paragraph can connect a claim, a short quotation or reference, explanation of the choice and a link to the question. This is a planning aid, not a requirement for identical sentence patterns. A second paragraph should add a contrast, development or complication instead of repeating the first example in different words.
Sources for this lesson
Pause and explain
Should an essay paragraph mainly retell events without linking them to the question?
Worked example
Plan two paragraphs for “How is trust presented?” using an original story where Mara hides a compass, later admits the damage, but the team checks her proposed route.
Show the worked solution
- First analyse concealment and its effect on shared knowledge.
- Then compare admission and the team’s continued checking.
Answer Argue that trust begins to recover through honesty but remains conditional on verification.
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Write your answer and reasoning first. Use a hint only if you are stuck. The model solution is for self-checking; your written work is not automatically marked.
Write a thesis for trust in the Mara example.
Give me a hint
Use concealment, admission and the continuing check.
Compare my reasoning
- Concealment initially damages trust.
- Admission helps, but checking shows it is not fully restored.
Trust is presented as recoverable through honesty but still dependent on evidence.
Look for these in your work
- Answer the theme question
- Preserve the tension
An essay repeats the map-hiding event in every paragraph. Propose a stronger organisation.
Give me a hint
Use distinct relevant moments.
Compare my reasoning
- Analyse the initial concealment.
- Compare the later admission and a subsequent test of trust.
Organise paragraphs around development and complication, using different evidence.
Look for these in your work
- Avoid repeated examples
- Trace change across the text
Revise a conclusion that introduces a major new episode never discussed in the essay.
Give me a hint
A conclusion should follow from the established reasoning.
Compare my reasoning
- Move the new episode into the argument if essential.
- Use the conclusion to weigh the analysis already developed and answer the task.
Conclude from the evidence already analysed, revising the body if the new episode changes the judgement.
Look for these in your work
- Maintain logical development
- Do not introduce unsupported late evidence
Common mistakes
- Give each paragraph a distinct job.
- Do not treat a paragraph formula as a substitute for thinking.
What can you explain now?
Should an essay paragraph mainly retell events without linking them to the question?
Compare with the explanation
No; select and analyse events that develop the argument.
Relevant narrative knowledge must be used to explain the presentation.
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Make it stick
Should an essay paragraph mainly retell events without linking them to the question?
If you needed the solution, close it and solve the problem again from a blank page. A correct answer is stronger when you can explain the reason for each step.